correction 糾錯(cuò)
A summer night,Tom was sleeping soundly when he was waken up by a loud noise ,He got up and looked out of the window .To his great surprise ,he saw the house near was on fire .He shouted on the top of his voice,"fire!fire!"Then he ran out and found many people there try to help put out the fire .Of course ,he joined in them ,They tried hard to bring water ,the fire was too big .It seemed that controlled the fire was impossible .
Luckily ,firemen arrived in time .In no time they control the fire and put out twenty minutes later.
-w- 無奈啊 我就找到幾處 沒找全 大家看看還有哪些錯(cuò)的