小孩寫篇作文,不知道語法（句型）等有沒有錯(cuò)誤?
Goodbye,primary school.I will leave you soon.I willmiss you forever.
Goodbye,dear teachers,thank you for teaching me for
six years.When I was down,you encouraged me and comforted me.You told me,”don’t
be proud!” when I succeeded.
Goodbye,dear classmates,thank you for being with me
for six years.Thank you for bringing me joy and happiness.Which made me became
lively and cheerful.
Goodbye,dear playground,you recorded my
passions.Goodbye,dear flowers and trees,you brought me a good mood everyday
and a good learning environment.
Goodbye,primary school.I am leaving you,but you willalways stay in my heart.