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Hello everyone.I want to tell you a story about Mr.Forgetful and Ben.
One person is very forgetful,Who is he?He is Mr.Forgetful.He has a dog,he calls it ben.ben always say:"Mr.forgetful is a good man,but he isn’t a good master.” Because he forget give ben breakfast every day.
Odie and ben are good friends.Odie visited ben's room.Mr.forgetful didn‘t give ben breakfast again.Ben can't bear that.He wants to give Mr.forgetful a lesson.
Ben leaves home.he wants let’s Mr.forgetful know he is angry.Mr.fogetful can’t find ben.He goes to Lost and Found Office.A girl greets him in the office.Mr.forgerful give her a photo of ben.The girl put photos into the window.
Odie and ben pass the Lost and Found Office.Ben sees photo his own.He know Mr.forgetful is looking for him.He goes home happily.but Mr.forgert calls him odie.Ben has nothing to say.
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