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  • 請(qǐng)高手幫忙改改我英語作文中的錯(cuò)誤,

    請(qǐng)高手幫忙改改我英語作文中的錯(cuò)誤,
    If I were a boy
    I wish I were a boy!
    I still remembered that when I was a child,my parents ofter said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” Because if I were a boy,my father would not have lost his job,my family would be a good family.
    Were I a boy,I would try my best to learn knowledge as much as possible.Because in order to support the family,parents try their best to work hard.I want to let them live a happy life.
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    If only I were a boy!
    If I were a boy,I would help the girls who need help.
    If I were a boy,I would take good care of my love and protect she.
    If I were a boy,I would take good care of my parents and my little sister/ brother.
    If I were a boy,I would…
    2
    Today,I would rather I had a job.
    If I had a job now,I would make much money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if were at work,I also can get much experience and knowledge.I think it will be make me more wonderful.To be the truth,I am very regret to study here.If I had not choose to study here,I think I would be happy now.In addition,If I were rich,I would buy a house for my parents.I want to live a life of ease and make people around me have a good life.In all,I will try my best exertions to study and I can find a good job.
    英語人氣:272 ℃時(shí)間:2020-04-16 17:52:17
    優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
    If I were a boy
    I wish I were a boy!
    I still remembered that when I was a child,my parents ofter(一般后面加現(xiàn)在時(shí),used to) said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” Because if I were a boy,my father would not have lost his job,my family would be a good family.
    (If I was,將were I刪去)Were I a boy,I would(縮寫成I’d會(huì)更好) try my best(也可用I’ll spare no effort) to learn knowledge as much as possible.Because in order to(刪去in order to,I want/hope)to support the family,parents try(不是過去時(shí)嗎,tried) their best to work hard.(好像不符語意吧,parents worked so hard that they were too exhausted to enjoy their life and)I want to let them live a happy life.
    1
    If only I were a boy!
    If I were a boy,I would help the girls who need help.
    If I were a boy,I would take good care of my love(lover) and protect she(her).
    If I were a boy,I would take good care of my parents and my little sister/ brother.
    If I were a boy,I would…
    2
    Today,I would rather I had a job.
    If I had a job now,I would make much(a lot of) money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if(I) were at work,I also can get much experience and knowledge.I think it will be make me more wonderful.To be the truth,I am very regret to study here.If I had not choose(if I didn’t make a choice)to study here,I think I would be happy now.In addition,If I were rich,I would buy a house for(to,此為固定搭配!) my parents.I want to live a life of ease(want to后面改為live a easy life) and make(let) people around me have a good life.In all,I will try my best exertions(好累贅~刪去吧) to study and I can(will比較符合語法規(guī)則) find a good job.
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