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祝學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步!

Dear Jack,
I am so glad【比how nice書面化一些】 to hear from you again. Since you want to know what is going on in our school, let me tell you something interesting【一點(diǎn)改動】.
Quite a few changes have taken place in my school recently. In the past, the teachers【改為復(fù)數(shù)】 always kept on explaining the points in class. Students just took notes. But now, we often discuss and try to solve the problems rose【rose改為raised】 by the teachers【改為復(fù)數(shù)】 or ourselves. After class, instead of doing so much homework, we enjoy【改為一般現(xiàn)在時】 different kinds of activities. We can read what we are interested in and study what appeals to us, such as computer. We can also go to the library or surf the Internet for various kinds of information.
We enjoy ourselves at school.
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming