Everybody both has their hobbies.both錯(cuò),應(yīng)該刪去；their錯(cuò),應(yīng)該用his/her
Well I like playing badmintoon、riding my bicycle playing teenins、and every day
這句話(huà)第一個(gè)頓號(hào)應(yīng)該改成逗點(diǎn),riding bicycle中間不應(yīng)該有my,riding bicycle和playing tennis應(yīng)該用and相連,every day前面的頓號(hào)和and應(yīng)該去掉；
I play them with my friend 此處them指代不明,應(yīng)該改為the games
I think play them is tired but very exciting and good for our health 這句話(huà)think后面應(yīng)該加that,play應(yīng)該改為playing
Do you like play them?此處play應(yīng)該改為playing
I think most people both like them.此句應(yīng)該改為l think most people like them both.
What about you hobbies?Can you tell me?此句第一句中的about應(yīng)該改為are