請某位英語老師評價一下我的英語作文
請某位英語老師評價一下我的英語作文
On life,childrens should respct parents.And help parents do mang things.Because they are very hard.They often take good care of our.They are very responsible .We shouldn't demand too much.Therefore we should help they do mang things.We should washing up our clothes.And keep our room clean .Give they a little thoublesome things.Because we are grow up.
On life,childrens should respct parents.And help parents do mang things.Because they are very hard.They often take good care of our.They are very responsible .We shouldn't demand too much.Therefore we should help they do mang things.We should washing up our clothes.And keep our room clean .Give they a little thoublesome things.Because we are grow up.
英語人氣：654 ℃時間：2019-10-19 05:21:20
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這篇很chinglish.人稱代詞的用法、固定搭配、情態(tài)動詞的用法等不恰當.
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