昨天,說明通篇最好大部分句子用一般過去時,與過去進行時結合.下面手寫一篇給您,希望您能給予采納.
Hello,my name is Li Yun.
Yesterday evening , OurClass Two,Grade Sevenheld(舉辦） an English party .During the party （在晚會上）
We sang songs,danced and played magicals,and so on.Wewere very happy.
Mr.Gao also sang an English song.His voice very nice.（聲音非常好聽）, After that,在那之后,
some studengts were eating things,
others were talking about their summer holiday .一些學生正在吃東西,一些學生正在討論暑假.We all had a good time.我們所有人都非常開心這個寫的很好可是一看就不是七年級的水平···呵呵，是有個別的難詞，但是一些初一優(yōu)秀點的學生還是寫得出的，況且你們初一已經學完了