in my opinion,the most important thing in my life is my mother.My mother is a housewife and good mother.She has medium height .and beautiful face.She is a generous,good natured and warm-hearted woman.When I have trouble that she always encourage me to do our best,she used to say “It don’t matter if you win or not.The important thing is to do your best and keep going”.Why is she the most mportant for me My answer would be ,she is the one that brought me to this wotld.She is the one who taught me how to treat others wel She is the one that shows me the greatest mother's love.She is the one who always give me a hand when I m in trouble,she is the one who stand beside me when Iam alone.I love my mum deeply as she is the one I love most.基本上不會(huì)有什么語法錯(cuò)誤了.第二段運(yùn)用的都是排比句,你朗誦起來的時(shí)候會(huì)更順口的.