有了senior就可以不用high了,I found myself was in the exact same spot where I was before ,
clue 換成 respond 我覺得比較好誒 had lost 用的怪怪的,改成lost吧.my family found the problem 比較好 consider my life 改一下吧.slowly是副詞,用在這不對(duì)哦,應(yīng)該是slow
幫忙修改下英語作文,內(nèi)容也好,語法也好,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)什么都好,有什么槽盡管吐吧……
幫忙修改下英語作文,內(nèi)容也好,語法也好,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)什么都好,有什么槽盡管吐吧……
When I went to senior high school ,I thought I met the largest problem in my life .
There are few people I knew,and the worse was the heavy schoolwork .Half a term later,I found myself in the exact same spot as I was before.In a long time,I ask myself “What are you doing?” But there wasn’t any clue .It seemed that everything had lost hope .I felt lonely and isolated.
Luckily,my family found these in time.They advised me to find my own rhythm.It calmed me down and I began to consider my life carefully.
And then,things began to fall into place.I thought I was just like a butterfly trapped in its cocoon,waiting to emerge.
Maybe my rhythm is very slowly,but I decide to enjoy it with all my energy.
When I went to senior high school ,I thought I met the largest problem in my life .
There are few people I knew,and the worse was the heavy schoolwork .Half a term later,I found myself in the exact same spot as I was before.In a long time,I ask myself “What are you doing?” But there wasn’t any clue .It seemed that everything had lost hope .I felt lonely and isolated.
Luckily,my family found these in time.They advised me to find my own rhythm.It calmed me down and I began to consider my life carefully.
And then,things began to fall into place.I thought I was just like a butterfly trapped in its cocoon,waiting to emerge.
Maybe my rhythm is very slowly,but I decide to enjoy it with all my energy.
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