第一句前后時(shí)態(tài)不對(duì),因該把if改成since,后面改成5000 yuan
generate改成generated作定語修飾traiffs表示產(chǎn)生的關(guān)稅
they provide us with advice is transported separately這句話有兩個(gè)動(dòng)詞了,改成they advise us that the goods can be transported separately
Which means pleasesend three firewalls to Shenzhen,Beijing and Shenyang separately這句也不對(duì),不太明白你具體想表達(dá)的意思,如果單純?cè)撨@句話的語法那應(yīng)該是it means we should send three separated firewalls to Shenzhen,Beijing and Shenyang
親,你的毛病太多,有什么其他的在問我大俠：怎么說這句話啊，“以上的建議供您參考，最好是與您當(dāng)?shù)氐奈锪鞴咀稍??！眛he above ideas for your reference, it is best to contact your local logisticscompany for more details.可以嗎？just refer tothe advice above ，it is better to cosultyour local logistics company for more details.這樣就沒問題了