哪位好心的英語老師能幫我改一下作文?
哪位好心的英語老師能幫我改一下作文?
Mrs.Stone had spent the whole morning picking blackberries.It was nearly lunch time,so she decided to make food to eat.She was just piecing meet when she heard a voice in the yard seemed like a cat.Then she saw an animal which have yellow fur and extremely big.She know it was not a cat because it was five times big than a cat.The animal suddenly ran away when she saw it and she thought it was going to its home.Mrs.Stone wanted to know where its room is so she dropped her basket and ran after it.Hearing the sound,the animal run more quickly.After which,Mrs.Stone couldn't see it anymore then she ran all the way home.She told her neighbours that she had seen a huge animal like cat but they did not believe her.She also telephoned the police but they think she had got mad.
我的英文水平不好,希望老師能幫幫我.
Mrs.Stone had spent the whole morning picking blackberries.It was nearly lunch time,so she decided to make food to eat.She was just piecing meet when she heard a voice in the yard seemed like a cat.Then she saw an animal which have yellow fur and extremely big.She know it was not a cat because it was five times big than a cat.The animal suddenly ran away when she saw it and she thought it was going to its home.Mrs.Stone wanted to know where its room is so she dropped her basket and ran after it.Hearing the sound,the animal run more quickly.After which,Mrs.Stone couldn't see it anymore then she ran all the way home.She told her neighbours that she had seen a huge animal like cat but they did not believe her.She also telephoned the police but they think she had got mad.
我的英文水平不好,希望老師能幫幫我.
英語人氣:564 ℃時間:2020-05-19 10:36:02
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Then she saw an animal which have yellow fur and extremely big改成Then she saw an animal which has yellow fur and it is extremely big.five times big改成biggerAfter which改成After thatshe had seen a hu...如果幫助到你 望采納哦
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