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I want to talk something about the Italian's favorite food— macaroni.(句型錯誤,還有語法錯誤)Macaroni is a local food in italian and also very popular all around the world.(我感覺這句很繁瑣,凸顯你的水平小改了) In Italy,one single Italian eats about 28 kilogram macaroni each year.
Now experts have different ideas about the history of the macaroni.Some believe that the Marco polo had taken it from China .However,more experts think that Etruscans,who was the residents of Northern Italy in the 7th century,had begun to make macaroni early at that time.
- -,你的文章 感覺就像拿漢語拼湊出來的.有語法.但句子結(jié)構(gòu)似乎沒有誒.后面我都有點不知道你想表達什么.你是不是拿在線翻譯寫的作文?能把你的意思大概給我說哈么
有誰能幫我修改一下這篇文章(只要把語法或用詞錯誤就出來就行了)
有誰能幫我修改一下這篇文章(只要把語法或用詞錯誤就出來就行了)
Today I want to talk about something which the Italians like to eat best,that is macaroni.Macaroni is an Italian food and it is also very popular all round the world.The Italians like them as the same way we like rice.In Italy,one single Italian eats 28 kilograms of macaroni every year.
Now experts have different ideas about the history of the macaroni.Some believe that the great explorer,Marco polo had taken them from China to Italy.But more experts are sure that Etruscans,who at that time,had once been the residents of Northern Italy,had begun to make macaroni early in the 7th century.For large wooden tables which were surely used to mix flour and cookers that were considered as cooking macaronis were found in the Etruscan ruins.Those are the best evidence to prove the inventors of the macaroni were Italians.
Today,people always cook the macaroni with ketchup,cheese,pepper,mushrooms,etc.These prove the fact that we have made a great many progress in cooking the macaroni.Macaroni also has its large family.Zita,Ennie,Lasagne,Orzo Route,Capellini… Macaroni has reached over 500 kinds and we have already had 2000 ways to cook the food.We will never have the chance to taste most of them.So if you plan to have some macaroni for Today’s dinner,try to cook it in a different way.I wish you can have a good appetite.
有急用.如果能夠提些修改意見的話就更好了,我會追加分數(shù).
Today I want to talk about something which the Italians like to eat best,that is macaroni.Macaroni is an Italian food and it is also very popular all round the world.The Italians like them as the same way we like rice.In Italy,one single Italian eats 28 kilograms of macaroni every year.
Now experts have different ideas about the history of the macaroni.Some believe that the great explorer,Marco polo had taken them from China to Italy.But more experts are sure that Etruscans,who at that time,had once been the residents of Northern Italy,had begun to make macaroni early in the 7th century.For large wooden tables which were surely used to mix flour and cookers that were considered as cooking macaronis were found in the Etruscan ruins.Those are the best evidence to prove the inventors of the macaroni were Italians.
Today,people always cook the macaroni with ketchup,cheese,pepper,mushrooms,etc.These prove the fact that we have made a great many progress in cooking the macaroni.Macaroni also has its large family.Zita,Ennie,Lasagne,Orzo Route,Capellini… Macaroni has reached over 500 kinds and we have already had 2000 ways to cook the food.We will never have the chance to taste most of them.So if you plan to have some macaroni for Today’s dinner,try to cook it in a different way.I wish you can have a good appetite.
有急用.如果能夠提些修改意見的話就更好了,我會追加分數(shù).
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