幫忙英語作文改錯,在線等,急!
Good morning.I'm glad to be here to introduce myself.My name is Shang Yun,and I am a seventeen-year-olds girl.I come from China and I'm studying in Luqiao High School.I have some interests include swimming in summer,playing the piano and reading novels.And I also like listening to music in my spare time.I'm a warm-harted girl who like making more friends.I'm fond of traveling and award of different customs.I have dreaming of traveling around the world since I'm a little girl.As a Chinese,I'm patriotic and really want to show the good qualities of our Nation to the world.So I am long to the chance to Germany.Please believe that I'm the right candidate and choose me!My introduction is over,thank you.
一樓說的幾個我已經(jīng)改了。我剛把寫的看了一遍，發(fā)現(xiàn)又有一個。
fond of 后面那個award是要加ing的對吧？
（award of 到底是不是了解的意思？如果不是，那了解的英文應(yīng)該為什么？）
還有the chance 后面是要改成to go to Germany事吧？
啊??？大家在幫忙仔細看看。