1、正文第二行,“The wider a road is,the more people is who walk up the road”改成“The wider one road is,the more people can walk on it”.
2、“Thus,all you need is a way that you just interested in”這句改成“Thus,finding a way which you are interested in is just what you need to do”.
3、“And there is warning that don't being judge just by the way others look”改成“Besides,there is a warning that you should not judge a way in others' view”.
4、"a dreamer of president "改成“a dreamer of becoming a president ”.
5、“His method,unexpectedly,to achieve purpose is getting worldwide fame.”改成“His key to success,unexpectedly,is getting worldwide fame.”
我只是把我認為不妥的地方改了,希望對你有所幫助~!