【She seemed very sadly.】應(yīng)該改為She seemed very sad.句意為她看起來十分傷心.seem為系動詞,此句中為主系表結(jié)構(gòu),不需要用副詞.
【She said that she had a big fight for her parents .】兩個錯誤.應(yīng)該改為She said that she had had a big fight with her parents.句意為她說她和她爸媽大吵一架.間接引語中主句中用的為過去時said,那么引語中表示過去發(fā)生的事情要用過去完成時.另外與...吵架是fight with,固定的.fight for是為...而戰(zhàn)斗.
【I went to a concert the last night.】應(yīng)該改為I went to a concert last night.我昨晚去看了場音樂會.昨晚就是last night ,不需要加冠詞the
【My cousin was crazy about a pop singer.】改為My cousin is crazy about a pop singer句意為我堂妹對一個流行歌手十分著迷.這是說明一種事實,她現(xiàn)在仍然對歌手著迷,要用一般現(xiàn)在時.
【She buys all of his CDs and listens his music every day.】改為She has bought all of his CDs and listens his music every day.句意為她已經(jīng)買了他是所有的CD,并且每天都聽他的歌.買CD應(yīng)該是過去已經(jīng)完成的事并對現(xiàn)在有影響.應(yīng)該也可以改成過去式.
【She goes to all of his concert and cares about anything about her.】此句有兩處錯誤,改為She has gone to all of his concert and cares about everything about her.句意為她去了他的每一場演唱會而且對關(guān)于他的一切都十分關(guān)心.我認為去演唱會要強調(diào)一個“已經(jīng)”意思,嗯,應(yīng)該也可以改成過去式吧.是關(guān)心他的每一件事,肯定句中用everything.
【I guess that's show they scolded her.】應(yīng)該為I guess that's show why they scolded her.關(guān)于這個句子我一開始還沒看懂..后來才想明白,句意為我猜想這就解釋了為什么他們要責備她.句子中有三套主謂結(jié)構(gòu),因此關(guān)系詞肯定有兩個,前面的賓語從句的that是省略掉了,但是why不能省.
【I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her parents.】應(yīng)該改為I hope my cousin will understand it's her fault not her parents'.注意是在最后的parents這個詞后加一撇.句意為我希望堂妹會明白這是她的錯而不是她父母的.是“不是父母的錯誤”,因此要用名詞所有格形式.
呃,沒找到別的了.大概就是這些了吧.其中有兩個我不太確定,就是我改成現(xiàn)在完成時的那兩個.暈了暈了..
還有啊,我找到了不止9個錯.你自己根據(jù)自己最近學(xué)的取舍吧.非常感謝你咯！辛苦啦\(^o^)/~采納吧 - -...