基本上語(yǔ)法是沒(méi)得問(wèn)題的、句子也通順
其實(shí)in my opinion：可以把next 與then調(diào)換一下位置
因?yàn)橐话鉻hen會(huì)在next前面...
幫忙改一篇英語(yǔ)作文,看看有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
幫忙改一篇英語(yǔ)作文,看看有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
Many people want to be volunteer.I also dream about it.But what should we do to be a volunteer?Here are some suggestions.
First,we must have a good body.It’s the most impotant thing.Next,we should be willing to be a volunteer.Then,we must be patient to others.After all,volunteer is a job to help other people.Finally,well,we’d better manage our time well.
Being a volunteer isn’t as easy as you can imagine.If you do ,do it carefully.I believe we can do it!Let’s take action!
提提修改意見(jiàn)!
Many people want to be volunteer.I also dream about it.But what should we do to be a volunteer?Here are some suggestions.
First,we must have a good body.It’s the most impotant thing.Next,we should be willing to be a volunteer.Then,we must be patient to others.After all,volunteer is a job to help other people.Finally,well,we’d better manage our time well.
Being a volunteer isn’t as easy as you can imagine.If you do ,do it carefully.I believe we can do it!Let’s take action!
提提修改意見(jiàn)!
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