請(qǐng)英語達(dá)人來點(diǎn)評(píng)一下這篇作文,這是一篇高中生作文,要糾正一下語法或拼寫錯(cuò)誤,并寫出需要改進(jìn)的地方
Dear Sir and Madam :
My name is Li Hua,I am a student of your school summer camp ,My aim to write this letter is that I want to make an appointment with the learning center .The reason are as follow .
First ,As a Chinese ,We have the different cooking style ,It appears to the Chinese ,We should
eat hot food and soup .but in England .I only eat bread .because the food is so cold Second I hope you can give me an accurate account of How to use the library computer .There is a confusing for me.
The Monday afternoon and Friday is suitable for me to meet you for another ,if you are OK,
Please call me :****.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours
Li Hua