on September 1964
這么明顯的錯(cuò)誤也犯?
只有說到年月日才用on,其他年或年月或月都用in的啊
哎,我的譯文是：
Nie Haisheng, male, from Zaoyang City, Hubei Province, was born in September 1964.Nie joined the army in June 1983 and turned into a Communist Party member in December 1986.He became one of China's first batch astronauts in January 1998.On October 12th 2005, Nie Haisheng flew to the outer space by taking "Shenzhou" VI spacecraft.And on October 17th, he with his companions landed back to the earth safely.Nie has a happy family.