等等,我正在改,比較可靠.
第一篇：
It snowed last night.This morning the road 【加was】covered with snow ,but there【we're——were估計你打錯了】 still a lot【加of】 bikes coming and going.Suddenly I saw a woman 【walk——fall】 off her bike.The woman 【lied—lay】on the ground and couldn't get up.I ran up to her and tried to help her,【and——but】 she still couldn't stand up because her right leg 【is——was】 broken.At that moment.【the——a】 policeman came over when he saw this.Immediately,he called 【at去掉】 a taxi.The taxi driver sent the woman to【the】 nearest hospital.There I telephoned the woman's office and told a man there the 【wholly—whole】 story.【Seen——Seeing】 that the woman was well looked after,I said goodbye to her.Before I left,the lady thanked me again ang again.
麻煩你再對一下原文,看看是否有打錯的,多出了錯誤處.
第二篇：
When I was doing my homework,the phone rang.【She——It】 was Jane.She wanted to speak to my 【older——elder 】brother.i told her that he had left 【for去掉】 home just a few minutes before.I asked her to ring up again tonight,【and-but】 she said 【tjat _that】she wouldn't be free.So I asked her 【that——if/whether】 she'd like to leave a message.Jane said there would be 【the——a】 lecture on English poetry by a 【visited ——visiting】professor in the Lecture Hall 【at】around 6:00 tomorrow evening.And she asked me to tell my brother not【加to】 be late.She would wait for him at the gate.I told her I would tell him 【direct——directly】【加he 】came back.
原文還是有打錯的啊,不過,該改的應(yīng)該都改出來了.希望能夠幫到你!