==第一段不適合展開(kāi)觀點(diǎn)吧,我第一段一般都是開(kāi)頭段
邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)多用連詞連接就行,別犯邏輯錯(cuò)誤,連詞盡量別用相同的或者太低級(jí)的
其實(shí)一般情況段落分好各段內(nèi)容觀點(diǎn)連接起來(lái)就行,邏輯雖然是評(píng)分點(diǎn),但并不難拿分
...though the spread of English do really bring some harm to the diversity of global culture,yet i
would state my objection to the issue after analyzing the following reasons.
initially,the spread of English will definitely accelerate the combination of various cultures,which would contribute much to the global culture,...
there is a further moe subtle point we must consider.as an international language,the spread of it
will promote international trade remarkably...
all factors considered,we can get the conclusion reasonaly that...