要是我,我就偏向?qū)懞锰?稍微提到壞處(讓步)
positive:1人們對體育項目的關(guān)注推廣發(fā)展了一些小眾的體育項目,使運(yùn)動方式帶來了發(fā)展
As the increasing attation be put on sports events ,some special-interest sports can be developed,so that it can grow the ways to execrise.
論點可以寫像高爾夫之類的運(yùn)動原來只是貴族的運(yùn)動,隨著媒體關(guān)注的增加,高爾夫變得更大眾化.
2豐富了人們的空閑生活
It enriches people's leisure time.
論點可以寫觀看體育賽事是很多上班族男人回家后的重要娛樂方式,一些重要的體育賽事如世界杯可以讓全球沸騰.
3帶動了相關(guān)產(chǎn)業(yè)的發(fā)展由此發(fā)展了經(jīng)濟(jì)
Some industries would be driven ,given that,enconomy can be enhanced as well.
論點可以舉例NBA之類的可以通過廣告業(yè)等方式帶來大量的經(jīng)濟(jì)收益,刺激經(jīng)濟(jì)增長.
nagetive:1人們會面臨肥胖等健康問題 ( 運(yùn)動能釋放壓力,若缺乏運(yùn)動,人們可能會產(chǎn)生心理疾病)
Execrising can reduce the stress ,people may get mental problems on condition that they lack of sport
people wil face the challenges on fitness if they keep having a sedentary lifestyle.
這個就不細(xì)說了,上面一句話再加上個小例子,再把下面接上,簡要結(jié)個尾說好處超過壞處,能不超字?jǐn)?shù)就謝天謝地了.3Q3Q就給采納了吧大哥結(jié)尾該怎么寫呢你把上面的點都寫到了能不超字?jǐn)?shù)就謝天謝地了,結(jié)尾隨便總結(jié)一句什么“因此,雖然有些負(fù)面影響,但總體帶來的好處更多?!敝惖木托辛恕?div style="margin-top:20px">
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Nowadays people prefer to follow sports events on TV rather than take part in sports themselves.Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays people prefer to follow sports events on TV rather than take part in sports themselves.Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
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