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Hello everybody, my name is ***. I was born in the beautiful city of Nanjing, I am 19 years old.I am a pleasant girl, so you can often hear my laughter.Sometimes,I like to climb and dad,it can help us to keep healthy.I like playing computer games,because it allows me free time not so boring,I also can make a lot of friends.I like to buy things on the internet,just spend some time,you can buy something pretty and cheap.I am not good at speaking English, I will try my best to learn it well, I want to be your friend, thank you!
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