I am not outgoing,so it was easy for me to bear loneliness.And the distance between my home and this university,which is 2410 kilometers,makes the situation(it) even worse.For me,being far away from home means I have to bear the loneliness and take care of myself.All these things have to be done just on my own.Everytime I see the moon and try desperately not to miss home and friends,the feeling of this keeps haunting me.(我說,把想家翻來覆去說這么多遍有意義么?既然是想家,統(tǒng)一在一個分段里比較好)
I am still in touch with all my friends,but I do not have enough courage to tell them that I miss them.During the call,I just said something funny which happened here to cover my real feelings.
Looking at the moon,missing my family and friends and crying stealthily,do these things have to fill my life when being far away from home?
真情實感倒是有,但是意境沒有表達(dá)到位.如樓上所言,太中式了.
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怕大家看不下去,就分開打了,寫的不好,請不要嘲笑.麻煩大家能幫我加些詞匯什么的使文章語句完美些.
這是下篇：
I am not outgoing,so it was easy for me to bear lonely.But now,there is about 2410 kilometers from my home to this university.For me,far away from my home means I have to bear loney and take care of myself.All these things have to be done just on my own.
Everytime I see the moon,of course I tried my best to aviod to see it,the feeling of missing my family and friends comes back to me again.
I keep in touch with all my friends,I did not have enough courage to tell them that I miss them,I just said some funny things which happened here to cover my real feelings.
Looking at the moon,missing my family and friends,crying stealthily,does these things have to full of my life when I far away from my home?
怕大家看不下去,就分開打了,寫的不好,請不要嘲笑.麻煩大家能幫我加些詞匯什么的使文章語句完美些.
這是下篇：
I am not outgoing,so it was easy for me to bear lonely.But now,there is about 2410 kilometers from my home to this university.For me,far away from my home means I have to bear loney and take care of myself.All these things have to be done just on my own.
Everytime I see the moon,of course I tried my best to aviod to see it,the feeling of missing my family and friends comes back to me again.
I keep in touch with all my friends,I did not have enough courage to tell them that I miss them,I just said some funny things which happened here to cover my real feelings.
Looking at the moon,missing my family and friends,crying stealthily,does these things have to full of my life when I far away from my home?
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