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The Computer
It is widely known that the computer is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.With the development of modern society,people can use their personal computers to do all kinds of things,such as shopping,studying,watching movies and so on.However,for middle school students,using too much computer might be harmful to their heath and study.We should use the computer in a right way to make full use of it,but we shouldn't play with it all the time.