幫我修改下面的一篇英語(yǔ)作文好嗎?
幫我修改下面的一篇英語(yǔ)作文好嗎?
Shanghai
Shanghai is my hometown.It's in east of China.Shanghai is an international city as well.There are many famous buildings in Shanghai.Such us the Shanghai Zoo,the Shanghai Grand Theatre and so on.It is interesting to play there.Shanghai's food also very famous.The dumplings are very nice and delicious.The world EXPO takes place in Shanghai and everybody comes to Shanghai to visit.So Shanghai is welcome.I love Shanghai.
Shanghai
Shanghai is my hometown.It's in east of China.Shanghai is an international city as well.There are many famous buildings in Shanghai.Such us the Shanghai Zoo,the Shanghai Grand Theatre and so on.It is interesting to play there.Shanghai's food also very famous.The dumplings are very nice and delicious.The world EXPO takes place in Shanghai and everybody comes to Shanghai to visit.So Shanghai is welcome.I love Shanghai.
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因?yàn)槲也皇巧虾Ｈ?所以對(duì)一些地名不太了解,內(nèi)容上沒(méi)幫你改多少,但結(jié)構(gòu)上給你做了些修改,希望樓主能滿意哈~Shanghai is my hometown.It's in the east of China.As everybody knows,Shanghai is an international cit...
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