1.第一行中：have been planning 改為plan,因?yàn)楸硎緦?lái)的意思,不用完成時(shí)
2.第二行中：as more time as 改為 as much time as,as...as當(dāng)中有形容詞原形
3.第二行中：who likes to play 改為who like to play,who引導(dǎo)的這個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句的先行詞是people,是復(fù)數(shù),因此從句謂語(yǔ)不需用第三人稱單數(shù)形式
4.第三行最后：getting the better 改成getting better,形容詞比較級(jí)前不加定冠詞the
5.第四行中：that play against 改成 that plays against,因?yàn)橄刃性~是a team,是第三人稱單數(shù),用plays
6.第五行中：rest of us 改成 all of us,他教我們所有人不是教“我們中其余的人”,我應(yīng)該也在被幫助對(duì)象中,所以是我們所有人
7.第五行中：improved 改成 to improve,help sb.(to) do sth.,幫助某人做某事,后面跟動(dòng)詞不定式,可加也可不加to
8.第五行中：tonight we are playing 改成 tonight we will play,今晚的事還未發(fā)生,用一般將來(lái)時(shí)
9.第六行：beat them 改成 beat it,擊敗的是one of the teams,一支隊(duì)不是復(fù)數(shù)
10.最后一行：won't make 改成 don't make