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Safety
The Spring Festival is coming soon,so we should care about Personal safety.
Firstly,when we go out ,we should pay attention to traffic safety.Before we cross the raod ,we should obey the traffic rules,or else that is against the rules.
Secondly,when we stay at home ,we also should keep safe.If we are at home alone,we should not use fire.because we can be hurt by fire.Fire is dangerous.but Electricity is more dangerous.we should use electricity carefully.It is dangerous to touch the television with wet hand.
If we do every things carefully,we will be happy every day!