Double Ninth Festival is a traditional festival of China. In the day, we often help some old people, and give them our loves. In this Double Ninth Festival, I help them all the time.
Yesterday, I went to the bus station of number 13, there is（were） a lot of people at there, when the bus came （,）many people ran to（into） it, I found a seat. But soon, I saw an old woman stood near me, I thought for a moment and decided to give her my seat, I looked her and smile friendly.
“Granny, come to seat here, please.”
“Thank you, kids, you are really a good student!”
“You are welcome; this is what I should do.”
Finally, she seat（seated） happily, although my feet is（was） so tired but my heart in this cold day is（was） hot. I think（thought） if we often share our loves for the old people,the world will become beautifully（more beautiful）!
寫的不錯啊,記得多檢查一遍,特別是語法哦!也謝謝你,我也正要寫一篇關于重陽節(jié)的日記.