Yesterday is Sunday.The day's weather is so hot.This afternoon,I went to the swimming pool with my father and my brother.
　　I put up the swimming suit.When I saw the people who is swimming,I wanted to swim very much .So I made up my mind to learn swimming today!
　　At first,I could not swim at all.My father was very patient.He He encouraged me and taught me how to swim.Though I was hard to swim ,I didn't give up learning swimming !My father taught me how to breath in the water first.Then ,He threw me into the deepest part of the swimming pool .That time I was so afraid !I tried and tried to swim .After a moment ,my father take me back .Three hours later,with the help of my father,I dared to swim myself.I could swim by myself.Although I couldn't swim very well,I was very happy.
　　Yesterday I not only learned how to swim ,but also learned to be brave !
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　　Today is Sunday.This morning,I went to the swimming pool with my mum.I decided to learn swimming today.
　　At first,I could not swim at all.My mother was very patient.She taught me how to swim.Three hours later,I could swim by myself.Although I couldn't swim very well,I was very happy.