英文:改語(yǔ)法!和改句子結(jié)構(gòu)
英文:改語(yǔ)法!和改句子結(jié)構(gòu)
求高人幫我改改語(yǔ)法吧.我這文章寫(xiě)得幼稚,順便幫我改改有些句子的結(jié)構(gòu).最好寫(xiě)的和美國(guó)人一樣,加點(diǎn)修飾詞之類(lèi)的~
All three of these pieces are a portrait and there are deep meaning behind them.Andy Warhol helps Pop Art paintings and screen printings movement in the 20th century.Warhol’s Blonde makes me remember the characters in Avatar because of the blue skin.I think Avatar shows the changing from 20th century till now.In this picture,the woman looks plastic,and Warhol really likes plastic because he thinks plastic people are more beautiful than real people.According to the research he said he thinks people forgot what emotions were supposed to be during the 1960s.That is the reason he likes to focus on famous people’s faces and catch the emotion.My first thought on The Blonde is she looks happy.And then I focus on her face for 5 seconds,I think she looks a little bit upset.At the beginning I think she looks happy because the color is bright.Thus,the color of the picture can change the emotion.The Self-portrait is also from 20th century.Compared to Warhol’s Blond,the Self-portrait looks sad.From her picture we can see she really wants to stop wars because of her experience.She just can use his drawing to show her thinking and sadness.She doesn’t want to speak to others that she hates war,but she just hope his drawing can tell and resonate.The picture of Gudea statue is really different from other two pictures.Gudea was the ruler of the Sumerian city state of Lagash.This statue includes ruler ship and religion.And it reminds me the Chinese Buddha.The same idea is they have their own beliefs.The color of the Gudea statues are always dark because the dark color looks serious.Thus,people would respect it.
求高人幫我改改語(yǔ)法吧.我這文章寫(xiě)得幼稚,順便幫我改改有些句子的結(jié)構(gòu).最好寫(xiě)的和美國(guó)人一樣,加點(diǎn)修飾詞之類(lèi)的~
All three of these pieces are a portrait and there are deep meaning behind them.Andy Warhol helps Pop Art paintings and screen printings movement in the 20th century.Warhol’s Blonde makes me remember the characters in Avatar because of the blue skin.I think Avatar shows the changing from 20th century till now.In this picture,the woman looks plastic,and Warhol really likes plastic because he thinks plastic people are more beautiful than real people.According to the research he said he thinks people forgot what emotions were supposed to be during the 1960s.That is the reason he likes to focus on famous people’s faces and catch the emotion.My first thought on The Blonde is she looks happy.And then I focus on her face for 5 seconds,I think she looks a little bit upset.At the beginning I think she looks happy because the color is bright.Thus,the color of the picture can change the emotion.The Self-portrait is also from 20th century.Compared to Warhol’s Blond,the Self-portrait looks sad.From her picture we can see she really wants to stop wars because of her experience.She just can use his drawing to show her thinking and sadness.She doesn’t want to speak to others that she hates war,but she just hope his drawing can tell and resonate.The picture of Gudea statue is really different from other two pictures.Gudea was the ruler of the Sumerian city state of Lagash.This statue includes ruler ship and religion.And it reminds me the Chinese Buddha.The same idea is they have their own beliefs.The color of the Gudea statues are always dark because the dark color looks serious.Thus,people would respect it.
英語(yǔ)人氣:578 ℃時(shí)間:2020-01-28 16:50:26
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
你的文章大體意思表達(dá)的挺明確的,但是有的地方廢話多,有的地方表達(dá)不簡(jiǎn)練 不清晰,記住讀起來(lái)朗朗上口的文章就是好文章,你的對(duì)藝術(shù)作品的評(píng)價(jià)總的來(lái)說(shuō)不錯(cuò)了,我就給改了幾個(gè)小地方,希望你以后繼續(xù)努力,再藝術(shù)鑒賞方面...
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