My favorite movie is Titanic .It's a love story about Jack and Rose.They met on Titanic.They loved each other for the first sight.On the night of April 15,1912 ,the Titanic had an accident on the way to America .Jack and Rose fell into the sea with many other people .They were very frightened because they were afraid of losing each other.In the end ,Rose was saved,but Jack died.Rose was very sad.
我最喜歡的電影是.它是一個關(guān)于杰克和露斯的愛情故事.他們在太坦尼克號上相遇.他們見到對方的第一眼就愛上了對方.在1912年4月15日的晚上,太坦尼克號在駛向美國的途中遇到了事故.杰克,露斯和其他很多人都掉到了海里.他們很害怕,因為他們怕失去對方.最后,露斯得救了,但是節(jié)課卻死了.露斯很悲傷.
注:這篇經(jīng)過我的改寫之后,大概是初中生的水平,一些高中才學的定語從句等復合句已經(jīng)被我改成簡單句了.只有少數(shù)較深的詞組:
for the first sight第一眼