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  • 一段英文,求修改挑錯(cuò).

    一段英文,求修改挑錯(cuò).
    I would like to say,we have to be steady.Perhaps in this enormous world,you are just a little screw.And only if you keep a stiff upper lip,holding your dream in the hand,you’ll be able to get to your Ruritania.Just like Leifeng,who was only an ordinary person,but also a great one,served many people day in and day out.Through his persistence,he realized his own value of life.Only if you be insistent,your life will be meaningful; and only if you be persistent,you will get closer to your dream step by step.
    This is just like what we face today.Now we are counting down to have our final exam,a towering peak of our three years’ school life.If you could overlook your future at this moment,you would definitely become tough and be able to fight tooth and nail.In this way,you will have a brighter youth,and create a more meaningful life.
    一些不地道或是語法有錯(cuò)的地方請(qǐng)及時(shí)指教!
    英語人氣:658 ℃時(shí)間:2020-06-29 08:37:58
    優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
    1.I would like to say,we have to be steady.逗號(hào)改成that,因?yàn)橐粋€(gè)句子中只能有一個(gè)動(dòng)詞,兩個(gè)以上就要有連詞,此句沒有連詞,加上that,構(gòu)成賓語從句.
    2.Just like Leifeng,who was only an ordinary person,only改成just,你的意思是只是一個(gè)普通人,所以用just 表示“只是”而非only.
    3.Just like Leifeng,who was only an ordinary person,but also a great one,這句話有歧義,你是想表達(dá)就像雷鋒,不但是一個(gè)普通人,而且是一個(gè)偉大的人嗎?可是在中文的表達(dá)上是不通的.
    4.Only if you be insistent,be改成are,因?yàn)?insistent是形容詞.
    5.you would definitely become tough and be able to fight tooth and nail.In this way,應(yīng)該是would have become,be改成been,因?yàn)槭翘摂M語氣.
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