Dear Sir or Madam(,)
I am very interested in your products after I (have) visited your stand at the Paris trade exhibition last month(.)
I would be (most)grateful if you could send me your catalogue for the complete range of this kind of product as well as your price list(.)
Besides stainless steel cutlery I also request a quotation for mild steel C.I.F.(Please)let me know your terms of payment and the time required for delivery after you (have)receive(received) the order(.) if(If) terms and delivery time are satisfactory(,) we will place regular orders(.)
you faithful(Yours Faithfully,)
Linda Wang
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