Yesterday afternoon.It was raining heavily.May and Tim didn't go home alone. They went home together.May and Tim both had umbrellas.They lives in the same place.On their way home.they saw a woman standing under the tree.she didn't have an umbrella.So she had to stand under the tree.May and Tim uesd May's umbrella.And gave the other one to the woman.the woman said they were good students. 一:a heavy rain是名詞,你用IT指代,表示"昨天下午是大雨".應(yīng)改為:IT WAS RAINING HARD.或IT WAS IN A HEAVY RAIN. 二:weren't---DIDN'T或用過(guò)去完成時(shí):HAD NOT GONE 三:前后句矛盾:又說(shuō)沒(méi)回家,又說(shuō)一起回家.(May and Tim weren't go home. They went home together) 四:a umbrella----AN UMBRELLA 五:lives in the same palace----LIVED AT THE SAME PLACE 六:stamd under the tree----STANDING UNDER A TREE 七:the other gave to the woman---THE OTHER WAS GIVEN TO THE WOMAN或THEY GAVE THE OTHER ONE TO THE WOMAN . 八:said they are two good students----THEY WERE