I dont't know why so many people like them very.
首先don't寫錯了,very也不能放在句尾,應(yīng)該去掉
Or maybe i just can't enjoy their music...
I大寫,其他沒錯,但覺得不太通順,如果你想說"或許我只是不懂得欣賞他們的音樂",你可以說maybe I don't know how to appreciate their music 更好一些
One of my friend told me that he love this band very much.
應(yīng)該是one of my friends,told為過去式,后面時態(tài)一致應(yīng)為loved
Then I seach sth about them and I found many people love their music!
搜索是search 不是seach,整句話時態(tài)都不清楚,前面search是一般現(xiàn)在時,后面found是過去式,再后面love又為現(xiàn)在時,應(yīng)統(tǒng)一.
So I want to know why.
這句對了
I listened some songs of them tonight.
應(yīng)該是listened to
I try to find some songs I like!
應(yīng)該是tried
But I couldn't .To be honest,I don't like that kind of music very much.
To be honest?你是不是想說"說句實話",那應(yīng)該表達為 In fact,后面用very much不妥,最好說I don't like that kind of music at all,我一點也不喜歡那種音樂.
They're not sounds bad but I just don't like.
這里錯了,應(yīng)該是they don't sound bad,而不應(yīng)該用被動
Maybe I'm opinionated because I just heard a few songs of them.
也許我自以為是因為我只聽了一點,heard應(yīng)該改成listened to,一點點應(yīng)該是few而不是a few.
Maybe I'm not have a right of comment because I nearly don't understand music.
應(yīng)該是I don't have a right comment,后面對了
I'll listen more music of them and then maybe I'll like their music because of knowing them.
listen后面加to,后面沒有語法錯誤
Do not make a comment too fast before you know it,I think.
沒錯
我覺得你的英語表達能力應(yīng)該注意訓(xùn)練啊,雖然有些看起來是對的,但是讀起來很不通順,應(yīng)該避免寫成中國式英語,希望你繼續(xù)努力.