一篇英語短文,求挑錯
A story about Xiang
Long long ago,he made a movie about thief catch policeman.He acted the thief The movie was a great success!And he was famous .He is Xiang .Xiang is a great man He is tall and strong.One day he eats dinner then he goes out far a walk At the First Avenue,he looks a small boy is fighting with a dog.And the dog looks very poor .Because the boy is very strong but Xiang is stronger than the boy .And Xiang is very angry .So he decide to help the poor dog Xiang run away.The small boy give him a hand.Xiang isn't feeling well.He can't give the small boy a hand .The small boy run away Xiang think he have a sick He bring the dog to his home.
純是小孩無聊之作,為了不形成錯誤語感,求指錯.
中文意思：關(guān)于祥的故事
很久很久以前,他出演了一部關(guān)于小偷抓警察的電影.他扮演了里面的小偷一角.這部電影取得了巨大的成功.他也出名了.他就是祥.祥是個很棒的男人,他長得又高又壯.一天,祥吃過晚飯出去散步.在第一大道上看到一個小男孩在和一只小狗打架.這只小狗看起來非常可憐,因為小男孩很強壯,但是,祥比小男孩更強壯.祥很生氣.所以決定幫助小狗.祥向男孩跑去,男孩給了他一拳.祥感覺很不舒服,他不能還手了.小男孩跑開了,祥覺得自己好像生了病,他把小狗帶回了家.
時態(tài),語法,一些詞組有什么錯?最好能擴寫詳細一點.