我寫了我的第一篇英語日記,求誰幫我看看有什么錯(cuò)誤,或者可以有更好的表達(dá)么
Wen.,May,4th Fine
I will keep a dairy from today on.I know there may be a difficulty to learn English well just as my Chinese,but I still want to have a try.Though there are many differences between English and Chinese,they are both languages,so these methods I study Chinese could be used in my English as well.And I blieve I'll do a good job.
I want to go to Peking University,and I know I'll manage to live my dream.
My first jounal is a little bit short,but it'll be more and more great,and so will my English.
我的英語作文是我最大的缺陷,所以我想寫日記是最好的聯(lián)系方法了吧,寫的不太好,而且沒什么內(nèi)容,請(qǐng)幫忙看看,怎樣表達(dá)更地道吧,