改語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
To be an engineer,you need to be precise,knowledgeable,and sometimes creative.As a student,I have confidence on my preciseness and attentiveness because carelessness is rarely the reason that I lose mark during exams.I don’t doubt my ability on management and leadership as well,but since I spend most time with more intelligent students; I tend play a supportive role rather than being a leader myself in most cases.However,I can judge others ideas and sometimes make up better ideas by combining the strengths of other’s thoughts.You can use methodical to describe me,maybe a little conservative as well.Unlike most energetic high school students,I like to have more privacy instead of filling up my schedules with various social activities.As a result,I can concentrate better on school work than most students since I have less activities to spend effort on.For creativity,I won’t spend time on attempting to create something unless a specific purpose has been clarified.However,if I do try to creative,I will put my best ability in it.Anyway,I have confidence on being an engineer in the field which I am interest in.
大學(xué)工程系申請(qǐng),問(wèn)你會(huì)是什么樣的engineer,請(qǐng)各位大俠幫看看語(yǔ)法,尤其注意介詞,如果有詞不準(zhǔn)確,或者哪里聽(tīng)起來(lái)不好請(qǐng)指出來(lái),
視改的好壞加懸賞分.