1.I more and more like this major 最好改成 I like this major more and more.
2.People's lives 應(yīng)該用單數(shù),life表示生活時(shí)是不可數(shù)的
3.Although I am far from Fujian,but life is also full of joy.去掉but或者although,這兩個(gè)詞不能同時(shí)出現(xiàn),用although或者though的時(shí)候表示轉(zhuǎn)折可以用yet或者不用.
4.They are friendly,lovely girl.girl用復(fù)數(shù)girls
5.We went to class together,eat together,learn together,and play together.這句也不算是錯(cuò)誤,但是很累贅,可以寫成 We went to class,eat ,learn and play together.
6.Life is full of sun.我理解你的意思應(yīng)該是想說生活充滿陽光吧~所以把sun改成sunshine比較好.
7.Now I want to do is get good grades in my studies.應(yīng)該是一個(gè)主語從句,要在I 前面加一個(gè)引導(dǎo)詞what.而且get這個(gè)動詞原形不能作表語,要么用getting,要么用to get
8.target 應(yīng)該是和 reach搭配用的,achieve可以和dream一起用,但是和target不太合適.
就是這樣啦~別看我列出這么多,其實(shí)總體來說也沒什么特別大的問題
希望LZ能明白這些細(xì)節(jié)