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某國際旅游團(tuán)游覽長城.車抵長城,下車前,你作為導(dǎo)游向大家作必要的交代和介紹.下面使講話內(nèi)容；
1世界上最長的城墻,有2000多年歷史,世界文化遺產(chǎn)之一
2正值旅游旺季,游客較多,注意安全
3旅游車在入口處等待,記住車號(hào)和車顏色
4貴重物品隨身攜帶,下車前關(guān)好車窗
5講話時(shí)間為下午1點(diǎn)半,在長城逗留三個(gè)半小時(shí),請準(zhǔn)時(shí)返回
6祝大家玩的愉快
寫作要求
1必須用5個(gè)句子介紹所給的全部內(nèi)容
2將五個(gè)句子組織成連貫的短文
Ladies and gentlement,
Here we are the foot of the Great Wall,let me tell you something about it,The Great Wall is the most long wall in the world,which has a history of two thousand years,it also is one of the cultural beritage of the world.There are so many tourist come here ,with the high tourist season,so we should look to our own safety.Before getting off the car ,we must take the valuable along,keep the car's windows close ,and then we will wait in the entrace where have the tourist bus,by the way,don;t forget the bus's number and its colour.We will spend three hours in the Great Wall,please come back before 4;30 PM.At last,I hope everybody having a good time.