Our school is very beautiful. There are many trees and flowers here,so the air here is very clean. I can hear birds singing.It's so wonderful.On the playground,you can see the students play basketball.Sometimes our teacher play with us.We feel very happy.In each class,there are many pictures in the wall.The teachers work very hard.They love us as if we were their children.Especially our headmaster - Mr. Bai. He's about 40 years old.When we meet some problems,he often helps us.In our school,the teachers and students are like firends.I love our school.I wish our school will get more and more beautiful!謝謝幫忙沒(méi)事~~O(∩_∩)O不過(guò)我覺(jué)得還缺點(diǎn)啥

缺點(diǎn)啥呢？字?jǐn)?shù)少的事嗎？還是對(duì)學(xué)校多點(diǎn)細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)？我重發(fā)了一份，但字?jǐn)?shù)超過(guò)限制了，發(fā)不上去。我把作文用word上傳個(gè)附件，你下載下來(lái)就能看到了！O(∩_∩)O