箭頭后面是我建議修改的,口語化其實也就是將事情敘述的簡便化,包括用詞和造句.以上是個人的理解.
Hello,my name is Zhou Zhixuan.---》 Hello,I'm Zhou Zhixuan.
I'm18 year old and I'm graduated from Luxun senior high school.---》I'm 18 and graduated from Luxun senior high school.
It's a great honor for me to have this interview.---》I feel honored to have this interview.
I'm engaged in the Heat energy conversion professional,but I'd like to study a better Professional.I'm interested in electronics,which is very practical,covering a lot of areas,having a great future.--－》I' m busy in the Heat energy conversion,learning that electronics is rather practical and widely-used,so it is having a greater future for me to study this professional.
Moreover,I am capable of enduring high pressure of learning,and I think I can have a perfect study environment in this area.---》besides that,I can endure high pressure of learning,and I think the study environment in this area is perfect as well.
Last but not least,I'm very appreciated to the rigorous and precision in German manufacturing.---》above all,I' appreciate the rigour and precision in German manufacturing.
My question is,
What's the most difficult subject in your professional?---》what's the hardest subject in your professional?
As the professional puts emphasis on the study of German,do you have arrangements of studying English and Remedial classes of the English level 4/6?---》As the professiona stresses the German study,do you arrange to study English and its level Remedial classes,like level 4/6?