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  • 誰能幫我檢查這段英語中的錯誤?

    誰能幫我檢查這段英語中的錯誤?
    My body is slender.I often wear a white dress.I'm full of tobacco.I have a family.I have millions of brothers and sisters.We have high well-knownness.Almost all the people known me-----cigarette.Many people love me very much.They can't live without me.I live in burning.The man who burned me will cut the life down with my burning.I can injure people with nicotine.You known,it's bad for people's body.Now,more and moreteens begin to love me.They often smoke.They think it can make him more handsome.But I've worked for many years.I feel tired now.I can't bear the tiring work!Everything needs rest!So you adults must ask them not to do that again.Or they will became weak sooner.從語法 詞匯 邏輯 等方面檢查
    英語人氣:612 ℃時間:2020-05-26 11:08:38
    優(yōu)質解答
    slender最好用slim.slender含有微弱的意思.
    We have high well-knownness改成we are well-known i the world.
    .Almost all the people known me.known改為know.因為是一般情況.
    You known,改為you know--
    bad for people's body..body改為health
    They think it can make him .him改為them
    Or they will became weak sooner.became 改為become.
    這篇作文好像是查字典拼出來的?
    不是很好..章詞什么的都用得不好.提個意見~
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