這篇英語作文有什么錯(cuò)誤?
這篇英語作文有什么錯(cuò)誤?
題目：你父母是你朋友么？你父母讓你取得好成績嗎？你父母讓你交朋友么？請以If I were a father/mother為題，寫一篇作文
作文：
If I were a father
We all must befathers or mothers in the future.If I were a father how should I treat my kids?Here is my idea
If I were afather I would teach my kid a lot if truth. For example, Iwould teach my kid to be happy all the time,to reagrd difficulty as challenge,to beat all the problems……If I were a father I would make friends with my kid , I would play games with it,I would keep it healthy,and growing fast.If I were a father ,I wouldn't make it get so good grades,but it is not allowed to copy others.Also I would help it to make a lots of friends.
I believe if I were a father ,I would bevery good
題目：你父母是你朋友么？你父母讓你取得好成績嗎？你父母讓你交朋友么？請以If I were a father/mother為題，寫一篇作文
作文：
If I were a father
We all must befathers or mothers in the future.If I were a father how should I treat my kids?Here is my idea
If I were afather I would teach my kid a lot if truth. For example, Iwould teach my kid to be happy all the time,to reagrd difficulty as challenge,to beat all the problems……If I were a father I would make friends with my kid , I would play games with it,I would keep it healthy,and growing fast.If I were a father ,I wouldn't make it get so good grades,but it is not allowed to copy others.Also I would help it to make a lots of friends.
I believe if I were a father ,I would bevery good
英語人氣：556 ℃時(shí)間：2019-12-17 16:53:25
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
我就在原文上改動(dòng)了哦~f I were a fatherWe all must be fathers or mothers in the future.（這句我會(huì)說成：we all will become parents in the future）If I were a father,how should I treat my kids?Here is my...
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