幫忙改正英語作文
My Family
Do you know the meaning of the word "family"?It means "Father,mother I love you."In fact,in my family,just like the word's meaning.
My father is busy working every day.I think he is as busy as me.Usually.,he drives the car and takesme to school.I feel indebted for what he does for me.When I was free,I thumped his back and made him comfortable.I really happy for that.
My mother has a small company.She always busy and got tired all day.She is really strict with me.She often tells me that she is getting older and older,and she wants me to be the top.And that,whatever I do,I always the apple of her eyes.And she is always proud of me.
As for me.now I am a high school student.I am yong,I have some beautiful dreams.But to achieve my dreams,I must study hard now.I wish I can be the one I wanna be,
The happiest time is the time for dinner.My family were sitting on the chair and eating their food.As usual,I am on purpose to say,I don't like this food.Mom,help me with it,OK?You eat it ,please.Of course.,that food must be my favorite,however ,I love my mother.
My family is full of love.Don;t you think so?
改正錯(cuò)誤.并分析之……
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