Few days ago, I saw my old class friend Li Yin. To my surprise, she had won a first class prize in the English competition. I can recall that she used to be a very shy girl when we were in school. She was so quiet and never said much in front of people. After parting for several years, she has really gone through a huge change. She is not afraid anymore. I should take pride in and be very happy for her. Maybe I should learn from her as well and be more condifent in myself, and try to transform myself into a braver person too.
這還可以嗎? 已用了全部你提供的詞,希望會(huì)滿意.
很高興能夠幫到你,并望采納,謝謝.