P1 There is[這樣會比較好,意思不變,因為接下來還有個地方有相同的意思] a [Public Transport Week ]activity 大寫活動/節(jié)日名稱for the first time in the city from 16th to 20th [September],2007.9月大寫.This activity will hold [ 這樣就不用2句都采用相同的表達方式]in beijing,shanghai,tianjin and some other cities[ so on ,別人怎么知道接下來是哪里,我覺得最好說清楚]
P2..時態(tài)錯了 It will be held in about 108 cities at the same time .During the activities 'time .the cities will call on people to get the conception of green transport and choose to walk ,take a bus,or ride the bike when they go out .On one hand it can sustainable recover [ can 是情態(tài)動詞 ] On the other hand,It also can protect our environment .Dear fellow freind.,Let's create a better life[要用這個詞] .,.thins is a meanning ful thing.We should do it together and hand in hand .[這兩句是有點多余]
ps ：時態(tài)錯誤比較多哦,建議多看看語法書.
我覺得應該修改的都在文章里該好了 括號里的是原因.
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There will be held a public transport week activity for the first time in the city from 16th to 20th ,september,2007.This activity will be held in beijing,shanghai,tianjin and so on .
It was held in about 108 cities at same time .During the activities 's time .the cities call on people to recive the conception of green transport and choose to walk ,by bus ,and by bike when they go out .
I am absolutely voted for the activities in the cities that can make us work and live more green and healthy .People should stop using their cars and star using public transport ,for the roads are too crowded as it is .For one thing ,it can sustainable recovery .For another ,It can also protect our environment .Dear fellow freind.Let's lead a better live .thins is a meanning ful thing.We should do it together and hand in hand .
作文標題是表達對中國城市公共交通周活動的看法.
請指出文中的語法錯誤 結構錯誤 以及詞匯錯誤 附上您的建議.
There will be held a public transport week activity for the first time in the city from 16th to 20th ,september,2007.This activity will be held in beijing,shanghai,tianjin and so on .
It was held in about 108 cities at same time .During the activities 's time .the cities call on people to recive the conception of green transport and choose to walk ,by bus ,and by bike when they go out .
I am absolutely voted for the activities in the cities that can make us work and live more green and healthy .People should stop using their cars and star using public transport ,for the roads are too crowded as it is .For one thing ,it can sustainable recovery .For another ,It can also protect our environment .Dear fellow freind.Let's lead a better live .thins is a meanning ful thing.We should do it together and hand in hand .
作文標題是表達對中國城市公共交通周活動的看法.
請指出文中的語法錯誤 結構錯誤 以及詞匯錯誤 附上您的建議.
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