because snow become water 改為because the snow melt down
the trees is become green改為the trees are becoming green
,I can play soccer ,fly the kites and run with my friends I also can ride my new bike.改為
,I can play soccer ,fly the kites ,run with my friendsand I can also ride my new bike.
中間再做一些斷句
一篇英語(yǔ)作文,修改
一篇英語(yǔ)作文,修改
Spring is coming ,I am very happy ,spring is my favorite season ,because snow become water ,the day is bcome long ,and the trees is become green ,I can play soccer ,fly the kites and run with my friends I also can ride my new bike.It sounds great .I love spring!
有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題,有的話請(qǐng)指出,
Spring is coming ,I am very happy ,spring is my favorite season ,because snow become water ,the day is bcome long ,and the trees is become green ,I can play soccer ,fly the kites and run with my friends I also can ride my new bike.It sounds great .I love spring!
有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題,有的話請(qǐng)指出,
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