看在你10分的份上,我?guī)湍銓懸黄?不過,以后作文要自己動手.這樣才會有進(jìn)步,讓別人代寫,永遠(yuǎn)都不會有進(jìn)步的呀.
Last sunday,my father took me to visit Tianmu Lake.On that day,It was sunny,there was not any cloud in the sky.Wow,so many people stayed by the lake,some were singing,some were dancing,some were flying kites with their children.
there were all kinds of shapes of boats on the lake.They were like ducks,dragons and so on.On a large boat sit several young men,they were playing the Guitar.They played so well that many Audiences were listened carefully and forgot to leave.
Dad let me go around everywhere,he read a novel under a big tree.He looked so relaxed.He said he was so happy ,so was I!